tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-401012145792484267.post4162738604325906412..comments2011-10-21T08:50:26.051-06:00Comments on Smith English 9 11-12: What Matters to me?anneshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00573450327737964454noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-401012145792484267.post-55115396226165783232011-09-14T11:05:10.424-06:002011-09-14T11:05:10.424-06:00Alex- please proofread. You have a number of error...Alex- please proofread. You have a number of errors with capitalization and run on sentences. Please redo. Also, make sure to end your piece with a concluding thought tying your ideas together.anneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00573450327737964454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-401012145792484267.post-20447102310071123802011-08-31T19:18:08.435-06:002011-08-31T19:18:08.435-06:00Alex- you have so many ideas! I'd like to se ...Alex- you have so many ideas! I'd like to se you work on proofreading this piece into a more formal writing piece. There are a number of errors with your punctuation, capitalization, and run on sentences. Your good ideas and voice are lost with all the errors. I really like what you did with your collage. Please take the time to polish this piece into a more professional piece. You can do it!anneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00573450327737964454noreply@blogger.com