tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-401012145792484267.post7057627810893958122..comments2011-10-21T08:50:26.051-06:00Comments on Smith English 9 11-12: PLN2anneshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00573450327737964454noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-401012145792484267.post-58669912949407397292011-09-01T07:19:30.249-06:002011-09-01T07:19:30.249-06:00Jack- great photos! This is a good piece of writi...Jack- great photos! This is a good piece of writing. I like that you began your response with a topic sentence. Let's work on some proofreading spots. There are some fragmented sentences and some missing marks of punctuation. Finally, end your piece with a concluding sentence summing up your ideas.anneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00573450327737964454noreply@blogger.com