tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-401012145792484267.post8697822661627448728..comments2011-10-21T08:50:26.051-06:00Comments on Smith English 9 11-12: anneshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00573450327737964454noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-401012145792484267.post-60917105925441094432011-08-31T14:06:34.872-06:002011-08-31T14:06:34.872-06:00Chase- you have a really great start to an A+ post...Chase- you have a really great start to an A+ post. Your ideas are excellent, but your sentences need to be proofread. You are missing marks of punctuation and capitalization. Also. some sentences just need a little extra attention. Finally, make sure to end your response with a concluding sentence. Great collage!anneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00573450327737964454noreply@blogger.com