Monday, October 17, 2011

Scribe 10/17/11

Today in are wonderful all bros English class we went over the outline for the Into the Wild essay we have tomorrow.
Here's a list of all the things your essay must include:

ESSAY FOR TOMORROW
Defend or refute the following question in a well written multi paragraph, thesis driven essay.

In Jon K’s Into the Wild, is Chris McCandless a visionary or a fool? Why or why not?

Use 2 direct quotations from the text to support your answer.


Heading:
  • Name
  • Class Info
  • Date
  • Title -centered and creative (Not underlined)

Intro:
  • Attention getter: quote, question, fact-make sure ti cite the sorce
  • Explain attention getter
  • Background info on text (Into the Wild- what it’s about)
  • Thesis: title, author, restate question, answer question, and why

Thesis Example: In Jon Krakauer’s Into the Wild, Chris McCandless is a visionary/fool because...
    1. he took a quest to find himself through abandoning his family; living alone in Alaska.
2. he went on a journey to discover himself by letting material possessions go and “living of the land.”
Body:
  • Topic Sentence (restatement of out thesis)
  • Set up first point
  • Lead-in quote, “quote” (Krakauer 67)
  • Explain quote- what does the quote mean, how does it connect to topic sentence, and thesis
  • Transition
  • Set up second point
  • Lead-in quote, “quote” (Krakauer 67)
  • Explain quote- what does the quote mean, how does it connect to topic sentence, and thesis
  • Concluding sentence

Concluding sentence example: Clearly by separating himself and living in solitary he accomplished his journey and is a visionary/fool.
Conclusion:
  • Restate thesis
  • Review point made
  • End with a satisfying conclusion (tie back to attention getter)
Homework: work on rough draft to prepare us for the essay, and REDO you work! Also finish you vocab card for Friday "malevolent"


P.S. if anyone has a good blender please share what kind it is with me because mine just broke :(

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