Scribe for 9-15-11

          Today in the most amazing class in the world, we crammed our head with more information than we did yesterday! We learned how to comment and revises our peers work and not only that but our own work. Some of the many things that we learned today consist of the proper parts of a conclusion statement, as followed:

• Restate thesis
• Review points
• End with a satisfying point

After we had been told how to revise someones writing the proper way we did musical revivsing where we walked around the desks then when the music stopped we found a random computer. We got some hardcore revising done.

Our homework for tonight is to finish our Conclusion for our paragraph we have been revising in class, any Redos that you may have to do and annotate the short stories.