Monday, August 29, 2011

Trenton Nohr Pln 2
















































Trenton Nohr

Pln 2

What matters to Trent can be described in the following...

My Family matters to me... I’ve always loved the family I’ve had and have never asked for anyone one different than the people that are already in my family.

My Dad matters to me... My Dad is a great hard working father. He takes care of me and my little brother alone. It sometimes gets hard for him to take care of us both but it is getting easier for him because I’m getting older and am helping keep my little brother in line.

My Nana matters to me... My Nana is always there for me whenever I need her, or ask for her help. Shes always sympathetic, kind and caring. Whenever I ask for like twenty dollars for a movie or a date or something she wont give me twenty... she’ll give me fifty which is way above and beyond what any Nana or grandma would do making her the best Nana ever.

My little brother Jasper matters to me... He is the most annoying meanist thing ever but without him I have no idea how I would survive. Yeah hes lived with his mom for a while but I always missed him (which is kinda weird because I can never wait to get away from him.) He looks up to me a lot but also looks down on me a lot like I’m the little brother. I never knew why he was so stubborn and hard headed but it doesn’t really matter because hes my little bra and bras stick together.

Mathew matters to me... Mathew is my “little” Uncle. Mathew is only nine years old and hes one of the coolest nine year old I’ve ever met. Hes such a vidiout (which here means he plays alot of video games) and is always looking for a challenge and can beat anyone in just about any game.

My aunt Trinity matters she is so annoying and whiney but I lover her to death and she will stand for any one. She has a strong heart and is always outgoing and I know here childhood will stay with her for life.

these are only a few of my family members but all the rest matter to me as much as the others do.

Martial Arts matters to me... it is a wonderful sport and hope to keep it with me forever.

My Martial Arts class matters to me. Sean, Logan, Isais, and Catrina are only a few of the people in my class and they all matter to me. With out them or anyone else our Dojo would never be the same.

My Sensai’s matter to me there a big part of the Dojo of course. They are the ones that teach us this beautiful ancient art of self defense.
My School matters to me. I love that I have the great offer to learn in a more wealthy community. I am also very glad that I have the offer to grow up with an education.

My friends matter to me. There a big pat of my life and without them I would have no idea where I would be without there support.

I have many things that matter to me but these are just a few, and some of the most important.

19 comments:

  1. Trent- I really like the detail and voice you use in your writing. Make sure to spend some time expanding on the areas you aren't explaining as fully. Also, there are some proofreading eerie with punctuating. I really like your use of a topic sentence and concluding sentence to give your piece structure.

    Add your photos!

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  2. Hands out of your pockets!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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  3. I like your questions and presentation! Try to keep your hands out of your pockets less distracting motions but great job!

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  4. Don't fiddle with your hands. Keep them out of your pockets too.

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  5. The connection to Isaiah was a good one and so was the actual presentation. Keep your hands out of your pockets but for the most part it was great.

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  6. I can see this is a very powerful subject for you and you can really show it. I liked your points. Good job.

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  7. Good connections and good presentation

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  8. good beginning question. Nice job with the eye contact and great job speaking from the heart. I think you kept the whole class interested. Good ending question

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  9. i like your presentation you told allot of information and you didn't look at the ground that much but you did a little.

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  10. The way you spoke to us made it sound like everything you said mattered actually mattered and god job not moving and rehearsing your speech that was very goood

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  11. Nice presentation. Good questions and nice job!!

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  12. You have really good details. I love how you told us about your whole family. Try talking to the audience more.

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  13. dont look down so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  14. Good job relating to your life and others peoples life. Good job telling us what really matters to me. Great job ending with a question.

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  15. Good intro to your article with the question. You seemed like you knew your article very well. you also had a sort of emotional PLN. Kind of abrubt ending though.

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  16. Don't play with your jacket, pants, hair. don't stair at ground but you gave good explanation and good questions, and you kept me thinking what really matters to me !

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  17. very good presentation. engaging and I wanted to hear more. I would just try to keep your hands out of your pockets and then your god

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  18. Great flow with words and good job understanding what you wrote. It seems like family is a huge part of your life. It is great to have so many people that love you and care about what you do. :)

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