Sunday, August 28, 2011

PLN 2

What matters to me.
My family matters to me. I love my mom because she cooks, cleans, and keeps me happy. My dad also cooks for me and he used to work at a very fancy restaurant called "The Red Lion Inn" that is in Bolder. My step dad and my step brother who is 16 are always supporting and helping me get better at football like teaching me better ways to block or when i pull. My sister is 15 and supportive and she’s fun to hang out with. I also have a little brother named Sam, he is 12, he is annoying many times, but mostly hes fun to play games with.
Football matters to me. Without football I would be extremely lazy. I have been playing football for three years and I love playing. I play strong tackle on the offensive line. I play for Arapahoe and football is two and a half hours every day during the week. I like being able to play football with all my friends like Adam, Jonathan,Monty, Isiah, and Alex
My dogs matter to me. I have two dogs named Rosie and Daisy at my biological father’s house. At my mom’s house I have three dogs named Leia, Ranger, and dusty. My dogs are all very nice and love to be around people. Sometimes they will nudge my shoulder when i'm writing a paper and mess me up.
My uncle matters to me. My uncle used to work for NASA and helped with the mars rover. Last year for career day he knew a person who is an engineer. My uncle matters to me because he helped me find my interest in what I want to study which is mainly some kind of engineer. I like designing things and fixing things.
 
School matters to me. If i don't go to school then i probably will be poor and not be able to get any job. I don't mind school anymore because now i get off hours and Ive made many more friends. I need to go to college and get good grades in school so i can get a job when i'm older. Without school I would be at home really bored and not know many things. Some days in school you have fun and get to play games in class or go outside.     

19 comments:

  1. Alex- this is a good start. I like hearing about what a supportive family you are part of. Work on adding details. I know there is more to the story than what you are telling me. Tell me more about football (position, team, friends, etc...) dogs (what kind are they, how many years old, what do they like to do), uncle (what is your interest, what makes you want to enter that profession, etc...) Keep pushing yourself for more thoroughness and description. Nice collage!

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  2. try to make a little more eye contact with the audience but good presentation.

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  3. i like the dress up and i like how you use your mother to do everything. i love hunting. your sister problem. i can help with that just tell her to respect your authority. you must have an interesting family

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  4. good eye contact but don't look at the board! keep your hands by your side. try not to say the word "kinda" all the time. and you don't have to and 'then' at the beginning of every new subject. Try to start and end better

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  5. Speak with more excitment when facing the crowd

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  6. give more eye contact! and get hands out of pockets ! but overall nice job !!

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  7. Good information and background but don't say like or um as much. Practice and know what you are saying. Keep your thoughts more organized. Good telling us what you really care about.

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  8. I like your pictures i thought it was cool that you got a free dog

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  9. Good information all about tour family. I like your collage. Good details about your dogs.

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  10. I can see you somewhat prepared but you have a lot to talk about with a lot of description and I really liked the presentation.

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  11. well done just don't look at the board as much

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  12. Overall I think that you had a great presentation, maybe just take your hands out of your pockets.

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  13. Hunting is pretty cool i agree but try not to studded as much good job

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  14. good points good eye contact good hand movement could of made a little more interesting but i liked it

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  15. Alex- you used and, its pretty cool a lot and stood still the entire time. It was a good presentation and said everything well and knew what you were saying.

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  16. Good job not bad at all for your first presentation good job looking at us

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  17. good job i liked your points and interests but your voice was monotone and didn't keep me interested.

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  18. The presentation had really good thoughts, but you were rambling and drifting off a bit. Try to stay focused and it will be much better.

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  19. I liked your presentation just try to keep from all the "kindas"

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